tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2467322282074575801.post3702737624236660814..comments2023-05-28T07:50:29.443-07:00Comments on 365 Zines a Year: Ich My Fish is Sicktomorrowboy 2.9http://www.blogger.com/profile/15396440789880578648noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2467322282074575801.post-34319893988774912202010-11-05T20:30:08.648-07:002010-11-05T20:30:08.648-07:00Hi again Matt!
Thanks for reviewing my mini-comic...Hi again Matt!<br /><br />Thanks for reviewing my mini-comic.<br />I appreciate your thoughts.<br /><br />I noticed the textual confusion you mentioned, and realized it would have been clearer had I simply drawn a line to separate the supporting text of the illustrations from the text of main narrative. It was supposed to read with the pictures "research+attitude= winner," and the bottom text, "who (the parasite) will soon lose this fight."<br /><br />Next time, I'll be more aware design elements to avoid narrative confusion.<br /><br />As for the size of the comic, I made the conscious decision of having the the word "sick" of the title stick out of the fish's mouth as if the fish was announcing its condition. <br /><br />But please let me know why your preference of it being square and fitted inside the fish could change/enhance the overall comic as I'm curious to know.<br /><br />thanks!<br />Sassy Spinster<br /><br />sassy.spinster (at) gmail.comUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17079493600980820649noreply@blogger.com